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Clever Product Description Example

If you’re looking for a clever product description example, you’ll like this post. Read on.

It’s always bothered me that retailers don’t change their product page descriptions during the year. It’s like they A/B test till they’ve found the perfect product page and then stop.

What if there were different perfect product pages for different times of the year? A perfect product page for summer, a perfect product page for the new year, a perfect product page for holiday time?

We need our product description to connect with what’s in the visitor’s mind. And what’s in the visitor’s mind changes at different points of the year.

It’s Spring in Michigan right now, so allergy season is in full swing. People looking for an air purifier will have this on top of their minds. So, on alen.com, we made a small tweak. The text we added:

Clever Product Description Example: Changing product descriptions with the season.

If you are a diet supplement business, updating the product descriptions at the start of the year makes sense because this is when people make New Year’s resolutions to lose weight. If we are selling a multi-purpose utility knife, it makes sense to personalize the product description during early December because that’s when people start holiday shopping for dad. Think about your business. Do you have seasonality? Could you rewrite your description based on your busy season?

What we’ve shown here is just the tip of the iceberg. If you want to fundamentally improve your product description and make a lot more $$$$, you need what we are about to reveal next.

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Site visitors can be placed into 3 groups:

— Ready to buy
— Will never buy
— Interested, but need a little more convincing

The 3rd group has the biggest revenue potential.

Evidence Our Formula Works

This strategy mentioned above isn’t a theoretical framework. It’s the base formula for all our conversion work for clients. This marketing framework can be used to boost sales for sports products. To sell skincare productsPet productsConsumer electronicsAthletic gearBack pain solutionsFood itemsHigh-end cooking tools.

Does the sales pitch always need to be shown as a popup? Nope.

It can also convert cold Facebook ad traffic, improve mobile conversion ratesgenerate calls, optimize your most important landing pageetc.

It can even be used to improve your overall conversion rates.

Converting Interested, but Need a Little More Convincing Group (With Examples)

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As always, great idea. Thanks for the reminder on making simple but powerful changes.

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Thanks, Rick.

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Glad you liked it.

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